BP9

Referring to the peer review process for student websites, please state three changes you would recommend for your peer’s website and justify reasons for those changes.

Citing the text for specific supportive evidence, name one positive aspect and one negative aspect that influenced your adolescent development.

The first thing I would recommend for my peer to change is the size of her font to bigger because the size appears to be too small, and if there are employers who have issues with their vision it would be difficult to read her blog. The thing I would recommend is for her page to have more pictures to reflect on her contents on her blog. The reason why I felt it is necessary to add more picture is because some employers might be more visual than others and having more picture would to more perspective on to she is trying to convey. The third thing I would change is for her to have more colors to add a bit more creativity to her blog. the reason it’s important is that it would show the employer that she is creative.

The positive aspect that positively shaped my adolescent development was parents because they were very supportive and encouraged me always do my best even I fail i can always get back up. The second negatively impacted my adolescent development was my ethnicity because my peers made fun of me because I was from a different country and they looked at me as uneducated and uncivilized.

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